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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-10-19 08:36 PM

I knelt upon my knees, "please God help me."
Seemingly unable to rise on my own.
Hollow echoes of misery in all of my poetry.
Swearing to all that asked me, that I was alone.

Each morning finding it harder to rise.
Wallowing in all of my sadness and pain.
I find myself here on the floor with tear filled eyes.
Asking and begging for you to help me again.

I do not hear your voice speaking out to me.
Just a quiet whisper deep in my soul.
Telling me to look to you for all I seek.
That you alone can make me feel whole.

Come to me Lord, for I surrender all.
You alone will help me go on.
Sweet Jesus in heaven please hear my call
show me that all hope is not gone.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-10-19 08:43 PM

Beautiful poem Lucie....I have always been told to go to God, for he could help me, and answer my prayers.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-19 08:46 PM

You are never alone, Lucie, when you know where to look. Obviously you do. A wonderful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-10-20 01:14 AM

You know my thoughts on this dear friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-20 10:08 AM

Beautiful verse.My heart goes out to you Dear Lady.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

5 posted 1999-10-20 10:38 AM

Such a heartfelt piece! I can feel the pain and need.
Excellent Lucie!! And Hugs......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-10-20 04:31 PM

As long as we have hope and faith, we always have something on which to stand.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

7 posted 1999-10-20 07:20 PM

Oh, Lucie! I've felt this way before, I can well remember the despair that threatened to consume me. I did turn it over to God and I found peace. I'm praying you find the same.
**hugs**

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 1999-10-20 07:26 PM

Lucie,
You touch me to the quick, wonderful words.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 1999-10-20 07:32 PM

Lucie, you're never alone.

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

10 posted 1999-10-20 07:35 PM

Thank you all for your replies.

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

11 posted 1999-10-20 08:06 PM

Amen.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

PoeticPreacher
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 28
jkljkj

12 posted 1999-10-20 08:30 PM

Your poetry has stroked the heart of God as one who strokes a harp.

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