Open Poetry #3 |
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one more then I'm off my son's computer |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL ![]() |
Van Winkle Syndrome Is it really so..... that yesterday was twenty years ago? Perhaps just blissful slumbering Van Winkle Syndrome is so encumbering. Oh what wondrous dreams were dreamt it hardly seems two decades spent. But yet the mirror reflects no lies and only corrects what one justifies. Today is tomorrow and tomorrow is today over seven thousand times it has been that way. Though at the speed of life it all happens so fast just wish for the future and it's gone to the past. So wherever I'm at, I'm glad you're still here to take memories with me for some other year. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Im not sure I understand what some of thelines mean in this one. Like "Today is tomorrow and tomorrow is today" Care to elaborate? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! Good reading! ![]() ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good Robert, I can certainly relate... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Off your son's computer? Does this mean we will not be graced with your words any longer? Ohh woe is me my friend! I sincerly hope this isn't the last we see of you Robert. I simply loved this poem. I can totally relate to it and it is very well written. Bravo my friend. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me thinks this is my favorite of yours. Oh how well I can relate! Very very nice! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
OK sys....today is actually tomorrow...get it?? and oncewe get to tomorrow it will be our today. Understand??? hehehehe or did that thoroughly confuse you??? OK...this is today....this day right now...but yesterday it was tomorrow....tomorrow once we get there, will be today. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Marilyn, a "poet" from another forum sent me a virus and I lost everything on my computer. I am on my son's now until mine comes back for the shop. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RobertB, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very profound Robert.....liked this much! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Ohh whew my friend! I thought we were going to be loosing out on you here. I am glad that you are not leaving us! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I can never leave......never!! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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