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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-19 07:36 PM


The Finality

It's really sad when:
tomorrow, has no hope in store.
When dreams are crushed, wishes
denied, and your will to live, is no more.

It really hurts when:
you're rejected, and left to find your own way.
With no one to share, the good or the bad,
or to listen, to what you have to say.

It's really lonely when:
you need to be held, with no arms there to hold you.
So you laugh alone, and dry your own tears,
And try to make, this way of life do.

But, It's total despair when:
You see no way out, knowing this is all there will be.
Today, forever, and for always,
Until your soul, is finally set free.

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 1999-09-26
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1 posted 1999-10-19 08:29 PM


Wow. I'm speechless, this was so great. To me it seems like you wrote this while looking into my heart. Thanks for sharing.
~Jess~

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 1999-10-19 08:47 PM


Blue Eyed Wanderer..
Thanks for reading this. I sincerely hope that things are better then this for you.
This was one of my "down" moments and I don't always feel this way..It feels so good
when I'm on the "up" after feeling this way.


After the tears, there is laughter!! ;-)

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Kitty**

Denise
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3 posted 1999-10-19 10:15 PM


This is very good Kitty!

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Denise

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