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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I am jailed before i am realized. I am condemned before my side is revealed. I am hated by the jailers, who are my peers. I am Dead before they even try to understand. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....this was deep. I really enjoyed it ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Thxs i appriciate the reply. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Thxs i appriciate the reply. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Great poem Tom. A little hint....don't push the submit button twice.  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Heavy as usual, but great job! ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
THis one made me think.Well done. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
thinking is good ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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