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Open Poetry #3

Just Like You

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-10-01 08:12 AM

Just Like You

Tear stained faces
as destinies woe
takes aim
accidentally.
Shattering innocent
dreams instantly
that once
were to be
future.

Take us far
expose your plan
explain
the pain away.
Cross over
see my world
know I'm just
like you.

Walk with me,
talk with me,
hold me
in your arms.
Never let me
faulter
while evil
forces attempt
pounding
at my door.

johnt300
Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 214
san diego, ca.

1 posted 1999-10-01 08:17 AM

Liked this one a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Have a good one.
Tyson

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-10-01 08:32 AM

Hope they quite pounding at your door soon. I like this one!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-10-01 08:39 AM

johnt300: Thank you very much.

WhtDove: I wrote this for a friend who's daughter just had a miscarriage. I felt really sad for them. Glad you liked it.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-01 11:16 PM

Nicely done

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

5 posted 1999-10-02 03:06 AM

very good piece Lost Dreamer.....enjoyed the read

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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