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Pleading For Nothingness.......( comments welcome.)
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Pleading For Nothingness.......( comments welcome.) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
The silence pierces me, As I sit in this darkness, Cold reaching all around me, Knifelike fingers plunging, Wickedly entangling themselves, In my broken soul, Cutting me to pieces, And slicing away, My final sliver of hope, Alone I am, My wounded heart pleading, To stop thudding, Inside my empty chest, I envite death, I challenge death, I scream to death, To sweep over me, And numb my pain, So I can end, And finally fade away....... |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I've laid in bed so many nights and had these very same thoughts. I hope things get better for you. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear SD, Thanx for your reply - this poem is one that I wrote a long time ago but because of some things that are happening for me now I read it and decided to post it. You say you've shared the same thoughts huh? I hope that you also feel good and not crappy : ) |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well, I don't scream for death, I hang on to life too much for that. I have a different reflex when things get that bad, I just pretend they aren't and bury the yesterdays, but I recognize the agony, and I too hope things are better for the both of you  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I hope that whatever the problem was/is...you're seeing life a little differently and I smile a wry smile here..:-) Big hugs though..You can borrow my ears anytime but I warn you, I shall probably try to make you smile.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Only once in my life have I begged for death. Since that time I have clung to life and hope. I understand the pain in your words. There is always hope...always. Anytime you need an ear please feel free to use mine. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine Honey,I am here for you, you know that, and please don't hesitate if you need me loved your poem. ((((HUGS))))------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much,your feelings are well expressed. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear ILoveIt, Thanx for your reply.I too used to bury things and bottle up my feelings but I did it for so long that I can't do it anymore. Now I am trying to deal with things and writing dark poems like this helps me to get those feelings out. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear RainbowGirl, Thanx for your reply. The poem was written quite some time ago but I read it last night and decided to post it cause I'm having a hard time with something at the moment. Thanx for your support - I will be OK : ) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply Marilyn, The poem is old but I thought I'd post it cause I'm going through some not so nice stuff at the moment - I'm OK though. What you wrote was very sweet - thankyou. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx DA - you are truly a beautiful person. Thanx for being so sweet. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear Watcher666, THanx for your lovely comment. |
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