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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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I came to you in lonesome's grip looking for release. You slayed that beast that held my heart and against my will I loved you. You gentled me when I rebeled with broken wings you held me. So patiently you made me see not everyone sees the ugly. Finally defenses fell and I returned your words. You released me from bonds of misery And when I held on to you.... You let me go. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Saxoness, I'm not sure if I read this one before, but it was beautiful. I loved the last couple lines  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The geatest kind of love is able to let go. I loved those last lines. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Saxoness! Very sweet! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Such a delicate piece - well done Angel. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Thanks everyone! This is one of those pieces you write in passing then forget about, only to find later and wonder why you didn't pay more attention to it. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
can i have some more responses, please?!? ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
May I comment again? Absolutely beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Response LOL, just kidding...indeed 'tis the hardest thing to do is to let go, but space is as important as closeness! Greeeeeeeeeeeaaat! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*G* Thanks guys! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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