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Shadows ( rewrite )
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Shadows ( rewrite ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Shadows (rewrite) I watched my shadow stretch the ground Awake with me without a sound. In motions that are just like mime. And mirror me like pantomime It seemed to move like puppetry, In lesser light and mimicry. Fathered by the sun, a clone Mothered by an objects loan. No feel of pain, pleasure or strife Reborn each light to a new life. Without our blood, tissue or bone. Brought into this world full grown. Made of shifting mediums sprawl Transparent and in constant fall Chameleon like abilities With hide and seek alacrity. An ever dark and brooding base Light induced, but never a face. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And how like shadows we can sometimes become to ourselves, Seymour. This is wonderfully wrought my friend.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Seymour! Ingenious! Thanks for one last tidbit before your cruise! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay Seymore, I can't keep up with you By the way, did I hear mention of a cruise...have a great time! Nice piece of writing by the way |
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