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Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-17 10:04 PM

Needs Not Met

We made love last night,
in the darkness of his room.
We let the feelings of desire,
that we had locked up, loose.
His body was soft and calm,
irresistible, and even loving.

I shook from nervousness,
for I knew it was wrong.
He doesn't love me
the way I love him.
I couldn't get this thought
of out of my mind.

He was the one I had craved.
The one I always wanted.
But I didn't want us to come
together like this.
In a sexual rage, drunken
by the desire of our own wants.

And as soon as the act
was finally completed,
I quietly walked to another
room and cried over his love.
For his desires were met,
but mine were left untouched.

All I wanted was for him
to love me in a heartfelt way.
To have feelings for me,
other than want.
I know I ask for a lot,
but can he not need me.

Can he not need to feel
my touch, like I need feel his.
Can he not see how much
I need him in troubled times.
Can he not feel when I'm
hurting and suffering.

All I wanted from him was
a connection between us.
All I needed was a love that
lasted longer than one night.
All I craved was him to touch
me with a small bit of feelings.

We made love last night,
in the darkness of his room.
And let the feelings of desire,
that we had locked up, loose.
But only he was granted
satisfaction from the action that occurred.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-17 10:06 PM

This is so sad Lynn

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-17 10:14 PM

Nothing could be more heartbreaking, I'm sure, in the love department than a situation like this. So sad.

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Denise

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-10-17 10:20 PM

heartfelt emotion brilliantly displayed.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-10-17 11:09 PM

Thanks for the responses. I started not to post this poem, but now that I have, I'm happy I did. I've been having this terrible luck with guys here lately and that's what I've been writing about. This is the least emotional of most of them. I just seemed to be getting "used" a lot, and I'm upset about allowing myself to let it happen. But, thanks again for the responses. I apreciate it.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

wannabe_poet
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 1999-10-17 11:55 PM

That is such a beautiful poem.. I know exactly where you stand. Your not alone on this. Good luck!

[This message has been edited by wannabe_poet (edited 10-17-1999).]

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 1999-10-18 09:43 PM

Excellent poem..very sad subject though as it's rough going through this.

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