Open Poetry #3 |
My Love is Forever |
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Rose wings of fantasy beckon me, Riding upon winds of creamy gold. Isles of gleaming emerald I see, Whispering ancient mysteries untold. Beauty paints the twinkling sky, And voices of the past quietly echo. Upon a silver breath wishes fly, Telling me to join the world below. But beauty is but a pale visage, An essence like a shallow sea. I shall not visit such a mirage, For love there shall never truly be. I'd much rather wade through life, Trudging through bitter tears and pain. Knowing I'd forever share your strife, Upon my shoulders, your tears would rain. Living with you would be the greatest gift, For you are all that truly matters to me. Knowing you love me, that is my heart's lift, And forever my love for you shall be. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Sounds like love to me and I like the way it sounds. Very nice. Ohme |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done.....the flow and the rhyme are good, the message wonderful |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Very very nice! I loved the imagery! Encore, Encore! I.Skye ------------------ Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*sighs*..yup, sounds like love to me too..thank you all. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooooooo beautiful, Krista! I loved it! ------------------ Denise |
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