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Into The Light (challenge from Lady deVine)
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Into The Light (challenge from Lady deVine) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I took your hand and stepped into the Light. So hard it was for me to blindly trust. For all of my life I've walked in the Night. The least thing you stirred within me was lust. So hard it was for me to blindly trust. In your loving words did I find new faith. The least thing you stirred within me was lust. No more could I live as a ghostly wraith. In your loving words did I find new faith. With you God answered each whispered prayer. No more could I live as a ghostly wraith. You saw through my facade's every layer. With you God answered each whispered prayer. This love abides through each dawning day's gloam. You saw through my facade's every layer. Our love went on past when God called you home. This love abides through each dawning day's gloam. To you and to God my soul I commend. Our love went on past when God called you home. With a last grateful breath my life does end. To you and to God my soul I commend. For all of my life I've walked in the Night. With a last grateful breath my life did end. I took your hand and stepped into the Light. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Enjoyable read Dream.. It leaves a warmth in my soul. Thank you for sharing. |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Lovely sentiment! I think you will find the light to be a place full of wonder, a place of growth and new beginnings. The life you ended was due to end....I am glad it lead to a brilliant new beginning! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I like this very much!  ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Another beauty from you, my friend. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This likes me my friend |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
This is an exceptionally moving poem. Nicely done. ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Lovely poem, Dream, I wish we could hear peaceful things like this come form you more often ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very refreshing - yet with a melancholic edge. I like! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Interesting twist my friend...echoes of lonliness and doubt dulled to a whisper...Well done of course, tis always hard to trust. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Loved this Soul-Bro, very moving ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful sentiments,excellent verse.Loved this! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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