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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-16 06:58 PM

Licker of wounds
Swatter of flies
Where are you now
To prevent my demise?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

1 posted 1999-10-16 08:19 PM

GREAT POETRY HERE CHILD UNFORTUNATELY IT IS HARD TO MAKE A REPLY FOR THIS AS IT IS AN ODD POEM FOR YOU.THE SWATTER OF FLIES, AND LICKER OF WOUNDS IS WITH YOU IN YOUR HOUSE AND HE LOVES YOU.

damn capslock oh well

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life is short kill quick

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

2 posted 1999-10-16 08:25 PM

Would you be referring to God, here, Sys D? If you are, I must say that is a very unique way to describe Him ... LOL ... don't believe I have ever heard that one!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-16 08:31 PM

It is for everyone who I have trusted that has betrayed me...I guess, in a way, Nocht, God could fit in there too.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-10-17 12:52 PM

Ok...call me dense (!) but I thought it was about a dog!!! My dog likes to lick my wounds..all dogs do..and he likes to chase flies...hmmmmmmmmmm...ok.....

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-10-17 12:08 PM

Wow !!! Short and to the POINT!!!!

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

6 posted 1999-10-17 01:09 PM

LOL Poet....this poem is any way you want to take it...so if for you it's about a dog, then it's a dog.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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