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Open Poetry #3

haiku~~*

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-10-16 05:50 PM

We lie apart.
A silvery slip of moon
cradles our star.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-10-16 05:52 PM

Speaks volumes Beki!!!

JennyLee

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

2 posted 1999-10-16 08:11 PM

Oooh ... this gave me chills. A well-written haiku never ceases to amaze me with its straightforward poignancy. Well done!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-16 10:12 PM

I like...alot

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-10-16 11:53 PM

Beki,
Good one.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 1999-10-17 05:12 PM

Thanks everyone :-)

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