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Justin Thyme
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 216
Oz

0 posted 1999-10-16 05:25 PM


How 'Bout That Toerag


How 'bout that Toerag,
ain't he a nut?
Writin' Them Poems
'bout who knows what.

Writin' 'bout poets
and writin' on the net.
Writin' Them poems
we won't forget.

How 'bout that big Toe,
ain't he a trip?
Writin' Them poems
like straight from the hip.

With a rag on his toe,
this Toerag can write!
Makin' words rhyme
right into the night.

How 'bout that poetman,
ain't he cool?
Signin' with his toe
out by the swimming pool.

Signin' on the canvas
his quick pro name,
'cause Toerag and Rockwell
they're one in the same!

Paintin' a hip painting
by old Rockwell.
Signing like Norman,
but I won't tell.

Here at the 'stute
this Rockwell's the man!
Wielding that paintbrush
right in them can.

How 'bout that Rockwell?
Ain't he shrewd?
Paintin' that ol' Cratchet nurse
in the nude.

How to be a Toerag
and write Them Rhymes?
That sure beats me,
cause I'm Justin Thyme.

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(well at least i think i am)

-Leonardo DaVinci
aka, Justin Thyme

© Copyright 1999 Justin Thyme - All Rights Reserved
Justin Conceivable
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 16

1 posted 1999-10-16 05:52 PM


This was just inconceivable! That Toe is really sumthin!
*<8O)
Ms. J. Conceivable

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-16 06:09 PM


A great poem about a great poet by another great poet!!! (what was that?)

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Denise

Justin Sayne
Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 53

3 posted 1999-10-16 06:27 PM


How 'bout that Toe?
He sure is shrewd!
Thought he'd paint Cratchet
in the nude.

So Toe was asked
To paint her butt
She changed the order
That he got

It's Justin Sayne
But Toe did doff
All of his garb
And Crachet scoffed

Now Justin Kace
You all should know
Here's naked Painting
Purple Toe!




[This message has been edited by Justin Sayne (edited 10-16-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-10-16 06:43 PM


LMAO.....are there any open rooms in this 'stute?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Justin Conceivable
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 16

5 posted 1999-10-16 06:45 PM


I ain't shore 'bout open rooms-they were gonna condemn the place last month.
But ask Justin Kace I think he's the brains of this outfit (they didn't tell me that when I hired on tho')
J.C

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
6 posted 1999-10-17 06:19 PM


ROFLMAO! Well done!!! (I'm not sure what dsnyder said, but I'll ditto it! LOL)

I'm sure glad I like purple! *G*

Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
7 posted 1999-10-17 08:00 PM


LOLOLOL! Great Job JT... same for you JS... I do love that portrait.
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
8 posted 1999-10-18 06:32 AM


I think this was well done?

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 10-18-1999).]

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
9 posted 1999-10-18 07:09 AM


I'm gonna go get my coffee, my medication, and maybe a cuppla' beers and come back and read this again!!!

All ya gotta do is ask...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-18-1999).]

Justin Thyme
Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216
Oz
10 posted 1999-10-18 09:28 AM


Hey, big Toe! You drink beer along with your meds and coffee in the morning, TOO??? Man oh man are we gonna have some fun in November.


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