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Open Poetry #3

take me back

spoonphed
New Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 3
flagstaff, az, 86011

0 posted 1999-10-16 12:38 PM

stand behind, a tinted window
hoping to find, someone in time
trying to be, someone your not
hoping to get, something they've got

reach inside, find it out
who you are, what you're about
don't try and hide, just let it out
it can't hurt, to be yourself

Take me back,
when i didn't care,
about anything,
and you were there.
When we could be,
be ourselves,
and it didn't matter to anyone else.
All i want is to be this way,
once again,
everyday.

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Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-16 06:25 AM

If only we could turn the clock back.....Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-16 02:07 PM

Very good! I liked this one alot!

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Denise

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-04 03:11 AM

we can never go back...this I have learned

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