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John Yaws
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0 posted 1999-10-11 01:33 AM


If you should ask me what I want-
About my hearts desire....
Twould be to share with all the world
What sets my heart afire.

Twould be to tell the dreams of mine
Which dwell within my soul-
Of tropic island paradise-
And arctic beauty cold.

Of depths of space, expanse of land-
A million unnamed stars-
The often spoke of Milky Way-
And Jupiter and Mars.

The beauty of an island dawn-
The sea give birth to sun-
The lovely desert evening-
When the day is nearly done.

The beauty of a maidens face
When once she falls in love-
Nobility of human race-
Which art and music proves.

The darker side of human woes-
The heartache and the loss.
Of those who "leap before they look"
And never count the cost.

If I could do what e'er I want-
I'd feign your heart inspire-
Communicate, emotions stir-
The Poet's one desire.


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~GS~

© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-10-11 02:12 AM


and you do it well, GS. Well written.
Dragoness
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2 posted 1999-10-11 03:27 AM


Well done!! My your hearts desire come true!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Sunshine
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3 posted 1999-10-11 11:00 AM


Truth...
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-10-11 02:12 PM


Nicely written flawless in it's meter and rhyme and I do so like the subject matter
Nan
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5 posted 1999-10-12 07:41 AM


Nice shot, GS....
Toerag
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6 posted 1999-10-12 07:56 AM


GS....And so? How many books ya got published man?...Very well done....!!!!!
Iloveit
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7 posted 1999-10-12 02:05 PM


I liked this, lots, you write for us all when you pen the poet's desire
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8 posted 1999-10-12 02:07 PM


Well done, GS... Welcome!!! I can see I'm going to have to go digging for your other poems. *S*
Munda
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9 posted 1999-10-16 07:16 AM


Very well written, I enjoyed reading this a lot.
Denise
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10 posted 1999-10-16 01:56 PM


Well done, indeed!

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Denise

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11 posted 2004-05-04 03:11 AM


awesome!
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