Open Poetry #3 |
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The Poet's Desire |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas ![]() |
If you should ask me what I want- About my hearts desire.... Twould be to share with all the world What sets my heart afire. Twould be to tell the dreams of mine Which dwell within my soul- Of tropic island paradise- And arctic beauty cold. Of depths of space, expanse of land- A million unnamed stars- The often spoke of Milky Way- And Jupiter and Mars. The beauty of an island dawn- The sea give birth to sun- The lovely desert evening- When the day is nearly done. The beauty of a maidens face When once she falls in love- Nobility of human race- Which art and music proves. The darker side of human woes- The heartache and the loss. Of those who "leap before they look" And never count the cost. If I could do what e'er I want- I'd feign your heart inspire- Communicate, emotions stir- The Poet's one desire. ------------------ ~GS~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and you do it well, GS. Well written. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done!! My your hearts desire come true! ![]() ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Truth... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written flawless in it's meter and rhyme and I do so like the subject matter |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice shot, GS.... ![]() |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
GS....And so? How many books ya got published man?...Very well done....!!!!! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I liked this, lots, you write for us all when you pen the poet's desire ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, GS... Welcome!!! I can see I'm going to have to go digging for your other poems. *S* |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Very well written, I enjoyed reading this a lot. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done, indeed! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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