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This is my Life
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This is my Life |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is my life Past more real than present Memories decay My thoughts are full of death wishes Past more real than present Hate now rules my heart My thoughts are full of death wishes My soul's a black abyss Hate now rules my heart I eye the knife, and the picture of you My soul's a black abyss My only morals, you long ago destroyed I eye the knife, and the picture of you Memories decay My only morals, you long ago destroyed This is my life ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Come on now Sys, don't be so gloomy LOL... No,really a dark one here! Jenny  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sad and dark. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A painful portrait. Well expressed. ------------------ Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Wow....You can't get much darker..well, perhaps you could....eeeek. Well, I really like the formatting here. Though the content is sad and dark...I still enjoyed the read. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Amy you know ill be glad to help you with this one real glad  also great convery of emotions here quite dark and well evil i liked it alot my dear child ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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