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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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This sweet tendril of longing stretches away across all oceans and I look out at my cool blue sky knowing that you see only dark stars or perhaps a distant moon I am lost, so shivered in the memory of your voice, your touch in my soul if not yet upon my flesh and I cannot reach you now, all I need is your strength your love, the gift of togetherness so many others have and do not know the true bliss of, victorious Time spreads a cruel disease of seconds and minutes and lonely hours relishing each tear shed in his name I would hold you now my dove if Time were but a shadow to be killed with a cloud, if Time were but a drop of rain to be dried by a willing sun... KM 15.9.99 ------------------ ...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
 I wish only that it could be so easy. Thank you star, for shining bright despite those clouds. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know that any thought of you drives away all clouds, so don't despair - I'm always here. - agreed. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This gave my tainted voyeurism cause for pause, yet did I decide to reply in spite of that pause. Cheer up, it could be much worse. ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn, what a beautiful expression of longing and one I know well, keep your faith you two it will happen  [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-18-1999).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Keen mind keen end. You have my love my friend. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The expression of your longing is so genuine it would touch anyone's heart. Beautifully done. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much....excellent Dear Lady.He's a lucky man to have your love. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A wonderful expression!  ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dear Dream - it could be indeed, I might never have found net-poets! Oh the horror... Hugs to you OK? Ruth - what is it about my name!!!!? Not you too...groan...thanks though! Sey - hey - that is so wonderful! You are my friend indeed. Balladeer - thankyou, I have never felt longing like this before - that is certain. watcher - and well he knows it..hehehehe dsnyder - thankyou, thankyou! I wish I didn't have to write about it though! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yes love, and I do know that I am lucky... to have you! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn, most sorry for the name thing...corrected it......this gives me a chance to tell you again what a wonderful poem this is |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I loved this, such emotions, and longing, *sigh* beautiful! |
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