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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
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0 posted 1999-10-15 01:08 AM


This sweet tendril
of longing
stretches away
across all oceans
and I look out
at my cool blue sky
knowing that you
see only dark stars
or perhaps a distant moon
I am lost, so
shivered in the
memory of your voice,
your touch in my soul
if not yet
upon my flesh and
I cannot reach you now,
all I need
is your strength
your love,
the gift of togetherness
so many others have
and do not know
the true bliss of,
victorious Time
spreads a cruel disease
of seconds and minutes
and lonely hours
relishing each tear
shed in his name
I would hold you now
my dove
if Time were but
a shadow to be
killed with a cloud,
if Time were but
a drop of rain
to be dried
by a willing sun...

KM 15.9.99



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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...

© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-10-15 01:28 AM



I wish only that it could be so easy.
Thank you star, for shining bright despite those clouds.

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-10-15 01:43 AM


You know that any thought of you drives away all clouds, so don't despair - I'm always here. - agreed.
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-10-15 02:24 AM


This gave my tainted voyeurism cause for pause, yet did I decide to reply in spite of that pause. Cheer up, it could be much worse.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-10-15 03:49 AM


Severn, what a beautiful expression of longing and one I know well, keep your faith you two it will happen

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-18-1999).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 1999-10-15 12:50 PM


Severn,
Keen mind keen end.
You have my love my friend.

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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6 posted 1999-10-15 01:01 PM


The expression of your longing is so genuine it would touch anyone's heart. Beautifully done.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-15 04:59 PM


Liked this much....excellent Dear Lady.He's a lucky man to have your love.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-10-16 07:07 PM


A wonderful expression!

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Denise

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

9 posted 1999-10-18 12:58 PM


Dear Dream - it could be indeed, I might never have found net-poets! Oh the horror...
Hugs to you OK?

Ruth - what is it about my name!!!!? Not you too...groan...thanks though!

Sey - hey - that is so wonderful! You are my friend indeed.

Balladeer - thankyou, I have never felt longing like this before - that is certain.

watcher - and well he knows it..hehehehe

dsnyder - thankyou, thankyou! I wish I didn't have to write about it though!

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
10 posted 1999-10-18 01:08 AM


Yes love, and I do know that I am lucky... to have you!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 1999-10-18 02:28 AM


Severn, most sorry for the name thing...corrected it......this gives me a chance to tell you again what a wonderful poem this is
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
12 posted 1999-10-18 12:22 PM


I loved this, such emotions, and longing, *sigh* beautiful!
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