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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Always hiding Time biding Never residing Watching Darkness hides me No one can see Am I behind the tree? Watching In shadows I abide Taking the free ride Stalking your hide Watching You'll never know How far I will go Just enjoy the show Watching Maybe I'm not there So just stop and stare Careful of the glare Watching Tonight as you sleep Your dreams I will reap Your heart I shall keep Ever Watching ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I liked the way you played with the words well done. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Yes, Watcher, I too like the choice of words. It is very interesting. Thanks Ohme |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoy the show... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Watching seems to feed the need for connection here, scary and sad. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Nice play with words indeed, but sad too....just come out and play ! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey, Watcher, This is quite voyeuristic to say the least. I agree with the above, just come out and play...we ain't all bad you know. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Interesting poem....I feel like Im being watched....  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
I know you well....I've been watching!! And I'm here to play!! Thank-You for your replies ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Turnabout's fair play...  |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
Nice one.. Scary though.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, chilling though! Nan-very cute! ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-17-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dark one there - I like it. |
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