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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Coming Storm Flash of lightening fills the window opened slightly allowing thunder to lunge through and rattle me from sleep RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Perfection! I can almost imagine being awoken by this storm! I say almost 'cause nothing wakes me up! I've even slept through earthquakes! Very good, Robert.  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
SO few words, so much in the way of visuals, beautiful |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
RobertBSuccinct - That's my new name for you... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Woa....hold on there Nan....let me get my Webster's out and look up succinct. ok..../concise..terse. Let me look up terse. ...Hmmmm ok yes. - using as few words as possible without loss of force or clearness. OK....you may from here on out call me RobertBSuccinct. I rather like that. :-} ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
awesome....so few words, yet you truly create the scene, the mood well...great work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love those nights like that! |
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