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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-10-14 03:02 AM


I was walking by the creek last night-
The grass wet from the dew-
As I sat and leaned against tree..
Sweetheart I thought of you.

I glanced up at the starry sky-
The stars looked like they knew
That here below a lonely guy
Had thoughts for only you.

I woke up in a lonely bed-
My dream life swiftly flew;
Gone was the comfort of my sleep
Where I was holding you.

I made the morning coffee-
Did the things you used to do,
Made breakfast, swept the kitchen-
With my thoughts consumed by you.

Thought I'd stop awhile and visit, girl
Since I was passing through;
And your home is right beside the way
I'll spend some time with you...

Want to tell you how I miss you-
Since that night you went away
I have spent a lot of hours..
By this lonely mound of clay.

Friends have told me you can't hear me-
But I know that isn't true-
For the only peace I ever have-
Is when I'm here with you.

Some have told me to find someone-
And to start my life anew,
No one on earth could take your place-
For my thoughts are all on you.



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Live large, people!
~GS~


© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-14 09:00 AM


Beautiful...I can think of no other words to describe it better
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
2 posted 1999-10-14 09:03 AM


I have been enjoying your poetry very much.. Thank you for sharing with all of us.

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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-10-14 09:46 AM


Lovely GS.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-16 08:06 PM


Very touching. I am all too familiar with this kind of pain. You have expressed it so well.

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Denise

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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 1999-10-16 08:16 PM


Another one in the bullseye, GS. Mourning the death of a loved one always strikes a deep chord.
Pufalove
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119
Houston, Tx. USA
6 posted 1999-10-18 12:23 PM


Been reading your poetry. It's really good! Gotta say, you're right up there with ole Balladeer. It is indeed a marvel that we have been given such a wonderful gift as memory. Hats off!


Ps. My pc doesn't know about that memory gift.

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-10-18 12:30 PM


Wistful...beautiful. Well done!
tulip
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown
8 posted 1999-10-18 02:07 AM


Tis beautiful!
wannabe_poet
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
9 posted 1999-10-22 12:32 PM


Yes, beautiful poem I must agree!!


PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
10 posted 1999-10-22 02:33 AM


Very haunting and very beautiful. You have a wonderful gift.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie


suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
11 posted 1999-10-22 10:09 AM


Sad and lovely... and an excellent example of how we live on in the hearts of those who love us!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

12 posted 1999-10-22 03:05 PM


Powerful,stirring.....Beautiful.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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