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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 04:15 PM



Right now I am struggling...
between love and hate.
I am being challenged...
To decide my fate.
I think that I could love you...
I'm really on the verge.
But I could also hate you...
Does love and hate merge?

To love you would be easy...
I love having you around.
Then hate peeks in...and then I think...
Which way am I bound?
I don't want to love you...
but,I find you fill my days.
You make me feel so special...
in so many ways.

I hate you for the way...
That you make me feel.
I hate you for the memories...
and all my thoughts you steal.
I hate being in the middle...
of these emotions from within.
Trying to love,but hating too...
Which one's going to win?

To love you would be wrong...
to hate you would be too.
Either way my heart will break...
All because of you.
So,love or hate, which will it be...
Which one will rule my heart?
There's just a line between the two...
They both are tearing me apart!

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
1 posted 1999-10-13 04:34 PM


Here's the order:

Love

Hurt

Confusion

Hate...but hate is a wasted emotion and is really another word for confused heartache..

so...believe that you are someone special and you have a heart that only recognises gold and there's an awful lot of gold out there just looking for a heart like yours.

HUGS


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-15 05:09 AM


such a fine line between the two isn't there?
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-16 07:01 PM


So very well expressed! Love and hate they say are closely related. And apathy...worlds apart from both!

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Denise

wannabe_poet
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since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-10-16 11:36 PM


Nice poem...I understand where you're coming from. It's true that the two can be so closely related.

Cheers
A.Z.

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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
5 posted 1999-10-17 06:36 PM


Love and hate... they seem such different emotions... but both mean that person matters to you. Well done!
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