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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-10-06 10:26 AM


I was lost until
I found you
Feeling your heart
Beating next to mine
Feeling the butterflies
In the pit of my stomach
As you danced with me
Holding me so tight
As if you let go
I'd disappear into the night
Without a sound
Our hearts joined
In a moment
Which lasts forever
Through the smiles & laughter
Through the pain and sorrow
This love will last through tomarrow.

© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-10-06 11:03 AM


Good poem...I know I have felt this way myself before too. You displayed the feelings and emotions well!


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-16 10:23 PM


Very lovely sentiments!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-16 10:52 PM


I enjoy the feel to this one
suthern
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4 posted 1999-10-17 06:32 PM


I enjoyed!
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