Open Poetry #3 |
Wherever You Are |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Now, wherever you are, my love, Turn your eyes to the skies above. I have asked the moon and she Will look upon you lovingly. I've whispered to the wind and he Will blow upon you tenderly. I've trusted in the stars and they Will seek you out and light your way. And so by moon and wind and star You'll have my love wherever you are. ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Indeed Beki, indeed. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sweet poem! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice, perfect in it's meter and rhyme. By the way, where have you been hiding out...been missing your postings on here |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Christopher, Watcher and Hoot :-) Hoot, I have just been busy and not writing much..will try to get here more often .Thanks for asking........(-: |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
bumpin myself up for more comment....forgive me? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
and why not..*g*...The times I've used the moon as a compass.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
You are forgiven, and in fact, you are to be both thanked and congratulated ... thanked for not letting this one pass me by, and congratulated on another beautiful piece of writing. Welcome back, Beki, you've been missed ... and what do you mean by letting your real life interfere with your postings..?!? Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Sorry Nocht, will try not to make that mistake again ;-) Thanks for your lovely comment. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I enjoyed this very much Beki....welcome back!! Jenny |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks Jenny...wish I could be more regular but time is a commodity these days and since I am not writing much,....hard to get here...it is good to be back tho, I love all the encouragement I find here :-) |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this one!! |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA applauds!! |
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