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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 12:06 PM


Now, wherever you are, my love,
Turn your eyes to the skies above.
I have asked the moon and she
Will look upon you lovingly.
I've whispered to the wind and he
Will blow upon you tenderly.
I've trusted in the stars and they
Will seek you out and light your way.
And so by moon and wind and star
You'll have my love wherever you are.

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-10-13 12:13 PM


Indeed Beki, indeed.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-13 06:28 AM


Sweet poem!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-13 09:15 AM


Very nice, perfect in it's meter and rhyme. By the way, where have you been hiding out...been missing your postings on here
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
4 posted 1999-10-13 02:44 PM


Thank you Christopher, Watcher and Hoot :-) Hoot, I have just been busy and not writing much..will try to get here more often .Thanks for asking........(-:
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
5 posted 1999-10-15 05:31 PM


bumpin myself up for more comment....forgive me?
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
6 posted 1999-10-15 05:40 PM


and why not..*g*...The times I've used the moon as a compass..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
7 posted 1999-10-15 08:18 PM


You are forgiven, and in fact, you are to be both thanked and congratulated ... thanked for not letting this one pass me by, and congratulated on another beautiful piece of writing. Welcome back, Beki, you've been missed ... and what do you mean by letting your real life interfere with your postings..?!?

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
8 posted 1999-10-16 05:47 PM


Sorry Nocht, will try not to make that mistake again ;-) Thanks for your lovely comment.
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
9 posted 1999-10-16 05:50 PM


I enjoyed this very much Beki....welcome back!!

Jenny

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
10 posted 1999-10-17 05:19 PM


Thanks Jenny...wish I could be more regular but time is a commodity these days and since I am not writing much,....hard to get here...it is good to be back tho, I love all the encouragement I find here :-)
wannabe_poet
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since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
11 posted 1999-10-22 12:36 PM


I really enjoyed this one!!


H. Arlequin
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since 1999-08-23
Posts 210

12 posted 1999-10-27 03:23 AM


HA applauds!!
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