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Master
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0 posted 1999-10-12 11:37 PM


A whole new day erupts
A needle with a thread--
The wind is pierced with drops
Of tears November bled
The leaves twirl in their flight
So weak and short of breath
While reaching for new height
They stumble into depth
Of liquid colored skies
Where heaven quickly smears
And echoes of their cries
Roam through deserted years


[This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-27-1999).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-12 11:51 PM


Beautiful imagery here, Master! I enjoyed this much!

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Denise

Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-10-13 06:26 AM


Lovely verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-10-13 09:12 AM


Beautifully done master a well written piece
Master
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4 posted 1999-10-13 03:15 PM


Thanks, thanks and thanks!
Denise
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5 posted 1999-10-26 11:55 PM


Isn't this beautiful?!

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Denise

Master
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6 posted 1999-10-27 12:10 PM


Wow, thanks Denise I though this one was done forever, but you brought it back to life!
Denise
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7 posted 1999-10-27 12:12 PM


Me thinks this one has a life of its own!

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Denise

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