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Open Poetry #3

A whole new day erupts...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-12 11:37 PM

A whole new day erupts
A needle with a thread--
The wind is pierced with drops
Of tears November bled
The leaves twirl in their flight
So weak and short of breath
While reaching for new height
They stumble into depth
Of liquid colored skies
Where heaven quickly smears
And echoes of their cries
Roam through deserted years

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-27-1999).]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-12 11:51 PM

Beautiful imagery here, Master! I enjoyed this much!

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-13 06:26 AM

Lovely verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-13 09:12 AM

Beautifully done master a well written piece

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-10-13 03:15 PM

Thanks, thanks and thanks!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-26 11:55 PM

Isn't this beautiful?!

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Denise

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-10-27 12:10 PM

Wow, thanks Denise I though this one was done forever, but you brought it back to life!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-10-27 12:12 PM

Me thinks this one has a life of its own!

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Denise

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