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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-10-12 08:31 AM


The spider works without a break,
Not stopping for an instant,
Building a trap that has no bait,
She'll not waste a single minute.

She spins her web, taking care,
With designs-precision neat,
Countless days of work now spent,
On this exquisite feat.

The web now flawless is blown away,
From winds of midnight air,
Her masterpiece of countless hours
Is now no longer there.

But relentlessly again she weaves,
Probably in vain,
Swept away by Autumn winds
Just to toil her spin again.

Spider's have such awesome tasks,
Against the winds of fate,
And we know just how she feels,
Using Windows 98!




[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 10-12-1999).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-10-12 08:46 AM


true, true, true! Bravo, Toerag!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 1999-10-12 08:57 AM


Toe,
Cute, enjoyed the read

suthern
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3 posted 1999-10-12 09:03 AM


ROFLMAO!!!! This is wonderful, Toe... and unfortunately, we do know! LOL. The more I've worked on something, the faster and more total the disconnect! LOL.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-10-12 09:09 AM


Oh, this is good!!! Everyone who has ever had a problem with their pc can relate!

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 1999-10-12 09:26 AM


Toe: Excellent..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-10-12 09:33 AM


ROFLMAO
Pepper
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7 posted 1999-10-12 10:19 AM


ROFL....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Saxoness
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8 posted 1999-10-12 01:21 PM


*grumble*
it took my two tries just to get to this one. Darn computer. lol
Good work!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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9 posted 1999-10-12 01:46 PM


great job these computers can be maddening for sure.....you captured it perfectly....and I liked how you wove in the spider thing, although I wouldn't understand a thing about how this www can be addicting....*wiping the webs away from her watch so she can see that it is now lunch time and she hasn't done a thing this morning but read poems...........* lol great poem
WhtDove
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10 posted 1999-10-12 03:11 PM


ROFL!!! Toe this was really good! I loved it. Though for now, I haven't a problem cause it crashed and I had to start all over again. So until next time. I'm in total agreement with ya!
Watcher666
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11 posted 1999-10-13 05:17 AM


ROFLMAO.....too funny!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Nan
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12 posted 1999-10-16 05:00 PM


Keep spinnin'
Denise
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13 posted 1999-10-16 06:20 PM


Eloquent verse combined with truth and humor!
LOVE IT!

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Denise

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14 posted 1999-10-16 07:57 PM


LOL! Good point, professor. But keyboards work with fingers, not Toes, yanno?
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
15 posted 1999-10-16 08:01 PM


Lol....yeah...the absolute worst is when the computer crashes and EVERYTHING is gone.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

PhaerieChild
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16 posted 1999-10-17 07:41 PM


Just installed Windows 98 about 2 weeks ago and I can relate. I was so happy with 95 but couldn't access some stuff cuz I needed 98 and sometimes it's a bummer. I feel just like that poor little spider!!

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie


Pufalove
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17 posted 1999-10-18 12:08 PM


I know..Toe! Been home a week and fighting to get back on so I can read, read, read. This piece is perfect, especially at this time of the year. I love the ending!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


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