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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Confusion He came to me on a night filled with confusion. He said he wanted and needed me more than anything else. But my heart was with someone other than him. I tried to explain how I felt, but no words could express it. I left him there, in the coldness of a January night. He wanted to follow me as I left, but I made him promise not to. Confusion still haunts me. Did I make the right choice? Was leaving him that night the wisest thing to do? For now, I'm alone. No one to hold, simply because I gave up the one who loved me for the one who didn't. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sad, but well written Love is a two way street though, it never works if only one loves ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad. Very well expressed. ------------------ Denise |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
Sad Indeed! Time heals all wounds I truly believe it eventhough time seems to stand still when you are hurting. Don't worry when you least expect it Mr.Right will come along. Again it is the 'TIME' thing!  |
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