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Synonyms of Life
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since 1999-09-21
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0 posted 1999-10-12 02:26 AM


This morning I placed in a classified ad:
One brain for sale, tis not too bad.
Memories free and dreams as well,
And many a story have they to tell,
Yet it's the memories that I must sell,

Five good friends killed by a driver drunk,
And bad times that be worse than a skunk,
Please, oh please buy my brain,
For It's caused me too much pain,
And on my soul is now it's stain.

What can I do without my hearts desires,
Nay for love but friendships spires,
Tis ten bucks-no less no more,
For my brain so filled with lore,
Which has my heart feeling poor.

*sigh*
Those memories and dreams are my life,
From good to bad and love and strife,
And I remember the first time I did see,
My past old friend sitting by a tree,
Bidding welcome to you and me...

Swimming in the pool by rocks so red,
And by the campfire were we fed,
Laughing crying and to let all out,
And for our friendships stout,
I was so happy I want to shout...

In my brain where happiness streams,
Ah geez I'll keep my many dreams,
In my brain my memories I shall stow,
Please someone please tell me how,
I want that ad out of the paper now!


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Life is community service. 100 years of it, time off for bad behavior. Take a break and laugh.

© Copyright 1999 Synonyms of Life - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-10-12 02:41 AM


very nice. But our memories help make us who we are, the good and the bad

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

2 posted 1999-10-12 06:57 AM


Nicely done.As for the ad....don't answer the phone!

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-12 09:53 AM


Nicely done...where can I reply, perhaps a fair exchange??
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-12 11:27 AM


very sad SoL.....I hope you find the peace you need.....thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 1999-10-17 07:27 AM


So sad and touching. Thanks for sharing this.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-17 02:29 PM


Very very good! I enjoyed this one very much!

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Denise

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