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i love making love to you.
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i love making love to you. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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i love making love to you... the softness in your eyes, the beauty you find in me, the way you stare into my soul, and know im all youll ever need. i love making love to... the man you have become, my soul, and my vision, to you my past slips away, my mistakes, beyond recognition. i love making love... with all my heart and soul, lost breathless in your kiss, i thought my love was to much to hold, but i never knew it would feel like this. i love making... the world outside fade away, lost in your heartbeat, and the sweet silence that surrounds, every time our bodies meet. i love... every move you make, every tear thats ever fallen, every single mistake, that stopped my heart from stalling. i... can still feel you, still smell your skin, still kiss you in my mind, and hold you like i did then. ------------------ im always the one to say im sorry, but have never once forgave myself...... |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Perfect! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Sweet and sensual! ------------------ Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written, the form works well for this piece |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amber, yes wonderfully written, loved it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely amber.....so beautifully written....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Amber: Exquisite.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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