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Dom Mart
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 1999-10-10 08:59 PM


We think we've gotten smarter.
We think we know much more
Than our parents, who at least knew
What they were paying for.
Today professions pile on jargon,
Profiteer through obfuscations,
But let me make this point clear
With some timely illustrations.

Dentists drill through our enamel
And chip away our plaque,
And find shadows on our X-Rays
To keep us coming back.
Attorneys draft our contracts
Using words we've never heard,
Then offer to translate them,
At twenty bucks a word.
In the past, my doctor told me
To drink orange juice and get rest.
Now he scribbles a referral
For a thousand dollar test.

But at siphoning our dollars
From our pockets into theirs
By means of mumbo-jumbo
and impenetrable airs,
The profession that takes the prize
For using all the tricks,
Well, of course, it's no contest,
You've guessed it--Politics!

© Copyright 1999 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-10 09:26 PM


Politics, hmmmmm, yep I think you hit that nail on the head! Very good, Dom!

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Denise

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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-10-11 01:18 AM


Oh, this one needs a boost. Good stuff here.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 1999-10-16 07:12 AM


: ) Just think this one needs another boost. : ) Well done, Dom.
suthern
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4 posted 1999-10-16 08:08 AM


Well done indeed!
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