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Some kind of magic
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Some kind of magic |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Passion is fire in the heat of the night when holding and touching could'nt feel more right The soft little touches, the kisses so sweet like a match to a candle, two things that must meet Our bodies the canvas, our mouth is the brush softly and slowly, not meant to be rushed Only one thing to think of in this darkness so great I want to be here forever, to see what we can create Nothing can top this, no feeling so real not a worldly possession like this makes us feel This is heaven on earth, all worries are gone your mind travels free, hearts sing a new song Yesterday's over, tomorrow's not here right now is before us, to live and hold dear ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Really like the message here Thunder.  ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Exactly Thunder! Live in the now, carpe diem, etc.... good job! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"Our bodies the canvas, our mouth is the brush" EXCELLENT line .....wow, why couldn't I have thought of that?? |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and opinions. This is the first of its kind out of my mind into poetry, didnt know how it would turn out, just sort of typed what was on mind at the time. I greatly appreciate the input from each of you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Magical, indeed!  ------------------ Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'm with HootOwl on this...the line I really liked was "Our bodies the canvas, our mouths the brush..." ahhh....that is absolutely superb!! Me likes this alot !! Will definately be reading more of your work! Haven't got to read much lately, but will !!! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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