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deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 1999-10-10 10:03 PM


O how long I have awaited thy coming
For years now you've been on the verge,
At times you seemed so unlikely--
But now, at last, you're my fervent urge.

How undependable you seem to be
Rarely showing up when expected,
But for some, slipping in ahead of time--
With surprise, having been undetected.

Why must you be e'er so cavalier
To show up only as You please?
Doesn't it get old, Cold Shoulder Receptions?
Or is that something, that with you, agrees?

So I say, you can come already
And together we will stroll out the door,
To Hell with this world, I've a Date with
Death--
And for me, it will last evermore!

© Copyright 1999 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-10 10:43 PM


Nicely done

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-10 10:44 PM


Very deep, this has impact!
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