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Dream Child |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Last night loved he so beautiful lost in a smile I made I looked through my hair across his skin and saw soft black rain sleeting across the pale land of his thigh His lips tasted of summer oceans of laughter Did gravity take take that milky brew of seed into the soft mother of me to grow He would hold our child like the small fragile face of a flower |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, my, this is exquisite. "looking through my hair....". I can't do it but I can imagine it so well. Beautiful. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed this very much, Martie! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Agree with balladeer, I can't look through my hair either, enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thankyou for your words. You can grow it or cut it, but somehow the feeling would be the same I think. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....this is remarkable. The imagery in this is exquisite and the romance wonderful. Thanks for sharing. BRAVO!!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Soft and sensual.....lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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