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Martie
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0 posted 1999-10-10 05:08 PM




Last night loved
he so beautiful
lost in a smile
I made

I looked through my hair
across his skin
and saw soft black rain
sleeting across the pale
land of his thigh

His lips tasted of
summer oceans of laughter

Did gravity take
take that milky brew of seed
into the soft mother of me
to grow

He would hold our child
like the small fragile face
of a flower

© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-10-10 05:15 PM


Oh, my, this is exquisite. "looking through my hair....". I can't do it but I can imagine it so well. Beautiful.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-10 05:20 PM


Absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed this very much, Martie!

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-10-10 06:44 PM


Martie,
Agree with balladeer, I can't look through my hair either, enjoyed the read.

Martie
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4 posted 1999-10-10 10:04 PM


Thankyou for your words. You can grow it or cut it, but somehow the feeling would be the same I think.
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5 posted 1999-10-10 10:43 PM


Wow....this is remarkable. The imagery in this is exquisite and the romance wonderful. Thanks for sharing. BRAVO!!!
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6 posted 1999-10-13 07:58 AM


Soft and sensual.....lovely!

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