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mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-10-01 07:46 PM

It was wonderful
like a dream
never to be interupted
by the reality of life
I lived in a bubble
surviving on your love
and you remain
after all this time
in love with me
you laid naked last night
on my bed
the only light
was that of a fading flame
burning between us
you smiled
and I fell on top of you
it was not to say goodbye
it was to say
again...
after all this time
we hang on
to the thought of us
forever
it will happen...
I will live to love you more
I will not let my life go
it will always be us
simply
hard...

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

1 posted 1999-10-01 08:07 PM

I would really love some comments on this one...It's my first since my last...which was a very long time ago... Before I lost my words

m

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-02 10:59 PM

I liked this read mia.....will be looking for more of your work

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-10-03 12:09 PM

Powerful...I enjoyed this.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-10-03 02:08 PM

Mia,
You didn't lose your words I found every one on the page. Enjoyed.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-10 05:37 PM

Ditto! Very lovely, Mia!

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Denise

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 1999-10-10 06:31 PM

it was very nice mia.....why...how did you lose your words????

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

7 posted 1999-10-10 11:09 PM

I love this Mia, very soft and beautiful.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

8 posted 1999-10-13 07:56 AM

Lovely Dear Lady.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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