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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Fate has brought you here to me, Across the waves, Beyond the seas, Fate came when I did not expect, Came in like a whisper, without a check. Fate is unseen, It merges the truest of loves, A planned action , From God above, No one knows the moment, The hour upon its visit, But when Fate comes, It never leaves, The one true thing, The answer to all our hope and dreams. |
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toocute4u_27 Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26Holdenville, OK USA |
Beautiful poem, but I would like to think that fate can bring us answers to our hopes and dreams. Although fate's timing is awful sometimes. I loved the poem. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes I know what you mean, the timing is weird sometimes! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
good poem and thoughts on a deep and sometimes controversial subject RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Robert, I believe in it! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, I really like this, I am a true believer in fate and destiny, although I also believe we can change ours to some extent, nothing is written in stone so to speak |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another lovely one! ------------------ Denise |
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