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toocute4u_27
Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

0 posted 1999-10-09 01:14 AM


Oh child of mine
Hair as golden as the sun
Eyes blue as the ocean

Oh child of mine
Why do you hurt so
The tears in your eyes overflow

Oh child of mine
I love you cant you see
I will stay with you for always

Oh child of mine
Please tell me what it is you fear
My hearts breaking I'm in tears

Oh child of mine
many you have loved and are now gone
But I'm your mother and will never part

Oh child of mine
Trust again in me
I will always be with you cant you see

Oh child of mine
How I long to see
Your eyes shining brightly

Oh child of mine
To here your laughter one more time
My heart would overflow with joy

Oh child of mine
Please take this to heart
I promise to never depart

Oh child of mine
Please tell me how to mend your heart
I love you and we will never be apart

© Copyright 1999 Kerrie - All Rights Reserved
Roger Leewright
Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28
Beaverton, OR.USA
1 posted 1999-10-09 02:49 AM


Welcome and thank you for this poem, is this about your child? I enjoyed it very much.
toocute4u_27
Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA
2 posted 1999-10-09 11:36 PM


thank you Roger. Yes this is about my child who is going through a difficult time right now. Thank you again.
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-09 11:43 PM


There's nothing sweeter than the love a mother has for her child! Your love shines in this! Very well done!

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Denise

toocute4u_27
Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA
4 posted 1999-10-10 04:47 PM


Thank you dsnyder. Yes there is no greater love than that of a mother and a child. Its a love that stands the test of time and can not be broken. Thank you!!!!!!
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