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** Our First Kiss **
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** Our First Kiss ** |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Pull me close & stare into My eyes that love you - only you Brush your lips across my own As we stand here all alone... Time stands still as your lips part Touch my mouth - this game we start to play - just your breath warm with mine As we kiss - our souls entwine.... Our mouths are hot, as they first meet Open, wanting - taunting sweet Softly meet my tongue with yours From this mingling, passion pours... Once I've had a taste of you - my mouth won't stop, I know it's true I'll softly lick your lips so wet I'm very glad our mouth's have met. Seduce me with your velvet kiss - On your neck, I whisper this... "Kissing is just foreplay for, the way my body wants you more...." ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Such ornery things to say on a Sunday!!! (he)(he)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pff, This is the first time I said WOW to one of your poems. Enjoyed the read. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is so beautiful, Femme. I'm plumb puckered out just from thinking about it. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Richard, I try really hard to have "pure" thoughts AT LEAST one day a week, (sigh) but you know me....I fall on my face everytime! Can't buy beer, can't have unclean thoughts....hmmm...I'm thinking I don't like Sundays afterall.....LOL Football is the ONLY reason for a Sunday!!! And Sey....you silly man....WOW right back at ya ! I assume you liked my "kiss"....LOL ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Balladeer, try not to think about it too much - your "puckerer" might get sore !! LOL hehehe Take some Tylenol and call me in the morning -  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
And what a kiss it was, Femme. But with more kisses to come... I guess we should look to the adult to see where this is going, huh? ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Of corse I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!! I just puckered up, and wham, right on the old smacker, lips that is, wow it about knocked the sh*?, or I mean socks off of me!!! I LOVED IT******************* Don't worry Michael, just kiddin>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@((((((((((((((((((((((((((()))))))))))))))) |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I LOVE THIS.. I echo the above.. except I will add a few more WOWS WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Pff, This poem is really perfect, It is exactly how I feel each time my fiance and I kiss... Keep them coming and who cares that it was posted on "Sunday", after all it is a day of rest... what else are you supposed to do??? Tammy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh - don't I wish!!!!!! Great poem there pFF! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Awesome, PFF....truly wonderful!! I love it! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I've just read your poem wait a mo I need to take a cold shower. back no, Wow, thats one hell of a kiss. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
I am afraid to say, LOL, my lips will never walk again, they have fallen, and I can't pick them up!!!!///??????/////?????/????????? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ############################################ (((((((((((((((())))))))))))))))))))((((((((( @@@@@@@@@@@@@@$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$@@@@@@@@@@@@$$ &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<< %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I agree w/my friend Tammy whatelse ya suppose to do on a day of rest!! Jenny |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
ummmm.... ------------------ THE Webmaster |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew.... |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
I had a first kiss. And NO imaginings can prepare you for TRUE LOVES first kiss. *sigh* (here I go down memory lane again) great poem my'dear Izzzzzzzy ------------------ "With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Wow! What a kiss!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Come on Femme, wake up and give me a BIG kiss already. *sigh* where you hiding at today? Miss you, Micahel ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PFF:  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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