Open Poetry #3 |
I can't Believe Anymore |
MEGAN Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 17Cottonwood, Ca United States |
Cry after cry, I yelled you name, Over and over, yet there was no reply. Though I still didn’t quit. The time was coming. Closer and closer after every plea. Where there was your light Darkness soon took over. Tears of my once love for you, Slowly hit the dark cold earth. Prayers were never answered. Hurt just came. No love nor peace. Just hurt. I ask why? But still there’s no answer. And I wonder will there ever be one. Not now. My heart is too broken. Too hurt and cold. Too much despair. I give up. I tried and tried, But no, you weren’t there, where you promised you would be. Once I did believe. But not now. After all the hurt I’ve suffered. I just can’t believe anymore. Not after all the hell I’ve been through. ------------------ "Love is a friendship that has caught fire." |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
The emotion running through this poem just grabs me. It is almost like I can vision your hurt in the mirrors of my mind. I myself have had this feeling, and you said very well what I never could! Good job! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very heartfelt expression of the loss of love! ------------------ Denise |
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