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Munda
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0 posted 1999-10-09 10:09 PM


Hello little flower in neigbours yard
what is it you want me to see?
Your colourful leaves, unfolding your heart
showing your real self to me?

Trying to show the existence of life
the beauty of to be?
For you to survive you need to thrive
and true love is the key?

I know little flower, I found within me
this treasure called true love
It fills my soul with harmony
this precious gift from above

Thanks for sharing your real self with me
your beauty of how to be
Your deepest true love is there to see
to all in search of the key

© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 1999-10-09 10:11 PM


*Sighs* Truly beautiful, Munda...keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Julie
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2 posted 1999-10-09 10:14 PM


Fantastic! I am a gardner so this poem quickly became special to me. Great job!


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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




Denise
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3 posted 1999-10-09 10:23 PM


So lovely!

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Denise

Pepper
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4 posted 1999-10-09 10:36 PM


delightful piece Munda....really flows beautifully.....thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Munda
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5 posted 1999-10-10 05:15 PM


Thanks everybody for your kind words. You make me feel part of this wonderful family. : )
Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-10-10 05:20 PM


Very nice, munda. You have a wonderful imagination.
Munda
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7 posted 1999-10-13 02:19 PM


Gee....thanks...blush. : )
Ohme
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8 posted 1999-10-13 03:01 PM



I have a brown thumb that can wipe out even an artificial plant. I like the way you made this flower grow.

Ohme

RobertB
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9 posted 1999-10-13 06:46 PM


you are part of this family!! we love you.



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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Munda
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10 posted 1999-10-14 06:45 PM


Ohme: you may have a brown thumb, but you do have a beautiful mind ! Thanks for your support. : )

RobertB: Thank you . : )and didn't you know ? We love you too ! : )

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-05-04 03:36 AM


this is adorable
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