The Eyes of Love(For DreamEvil re: Christian Forgiveness)

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Denise

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0 posted 1999-10-09 01:20 AM

Why all the angst;
This topic's old;
Please give me ear;
May I be bold?
Man's eyes belong
On his own soul;
A lesson here...
Love is the goal;
Removing specks
From brother's eye
When mighty log
Doth in mine lie
Is not the path
Of life, you see,
It only breeds
Futility.
No answer there
Is ever found
When fighting on
This battleground;
And faults we find
in other men
Reside in us
-So look again;
In haste do not
Judge any man
Just give them love
That is His plan;
If we would all
Do only this
This world would be
One full of bliss!
This wisdom's from
A loving God
To help us tread
This mortal sod;
And more like Him
I strive to be
To learn His love
Is my heart's plea!
The lesson here
Is plain to see
I won't judge you
And don't judge me!!

Hope this Helps!

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Denise

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1 posted 1999-10-09 01:24 AM

I loved this D, It was a great witness!

DreamEvil
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2 posted 1999-10-09 03:15 AM

Interesting way of telling me that I should keep my mouth shut on the subject of religious hypocrisy.

"Do only this
This world would be
One full of bliss!"

That is exactly my point, if all men did this it would indeed be a wondrous world but since they don't it will never happen.

Point taken though, you will hear naught from me about christian hypocrisy as this says it for me.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Denise

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3 posted 1999-10-09 12:46 PM

Thank you Romantic Heart and DreamEvil for reading and commenting.
Dream-you miss my point. I'm not telling you or anyone else to keep their mouth shut on any subject. I'm am merely trying, though perhaps poorly, to say that we are in the wrong arena to begin with if we are looking at other's shortcomings. We would all do well to judge only ourselves. Something to strive for though never completely reached in this life.

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Denise

Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 1999-10-09 03:43 PM

I really like this, Denise. We were just talking about this on Wednesday at my church. Would you mind if I printed it out to share with them, all credit to you of course?

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Pepper
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5 posted 1999-10-09 03:49 PM

amen.....nice work Denise....thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

U K Hero
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6 posted 1999-10-09 03:54 PM

what wonderful words Dsnyder, much liked.

Shar
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7 posted 1999-10-09 03:58 PM

Denise,
I really love your poem.....It says a lot.
If only we could all live by it, but then I guess we would all be in heaven. Some day I pray.
Shar

Mike
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8 posted 1999-10-09 04:03 PM

Denise... you have an amazing ability to express yourself in verse...
Mr. DreamEvil... one of your favorite terms comes to mind... drivel... that is not christian hypocrisy... just my personal views

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 10-09-1999).]

Denise

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9 posted 1999-10-09 04:13 PM

Thank you all for your read and kind comments!

Echo, yes you may print it out and share it! I would be honored.

And let me add that this was not meant as a judgement of anyone. We all have faults (logs)that need to be dealt with. So much so that we should not have any free time to start inspecting others! And yes, perfection will only come when we pass over to that blessed shore!

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Denise

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10 posted 1999-10-09 05:25 PM

Denise, I'm sure you have faults as we all do.....but your poetic ability is not one of them. Again, wonderful work.

Denise

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11 posted 1999-10-09 07:09 PM

Why, thank you, Sir Balladeer for your kind comments!

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Denise

freespiritfem
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12 posted 1999-10-09 07:26 PM

Bravo,Denise....s very very TRUE!!!
thank you, i really loved it!!!

Huggs!!!

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Paula Diane S.

Julie
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13 posted 1999-10-09 08:47 PM

Excellent Denise! I got your message.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert

Munda
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14 posted 1999-10-09 09:18 PM

What a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing it. : )

Elizabeth

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15 posted 1999-10-09 09:23 PM

thanks d

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Denise

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16 posted 1999-10-09 11:15 PM

Paula, Julie, Munda and Elizabeth, thank you for reading and commenting. I'm always glad for your input!

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Denise

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