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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
GLORIFIED LIES OF YESTERYEAR HORRID LIES THAT SPEAK OF CHEAR IDEAL LIES THAT MAKE SOME JEER POLLITICAL LIES WHICH WE FEAR TEACHERS LIES THAT WE HEAR SPEAKERS LIES AT WHICH WE LEAR ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
The poem's idea was good, I thought. HAs some spelling errors though, and I think the end was too abript....it doesn't have proper closing really. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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