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freespiritfem
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since 1999-10-07
Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

0 posted 1999-10-08 01:48 PM



Tell me please, what is gonna happen?
I give my love so free and open.
Will we ever be one together?
You say you will love me Forever.

Forever, what is the meaning of this word?
I'm waiting to hear from your lips the first chord.
Tell me, My love what explanations can you give?
Does it mean, for as long as we live?

Forever,is it a endless space of time?
Come on Darlin i need you to give me a sign.
Tell me please,i need to know,
Is it for as long as the wind will blow?

Forever,to me My Dear Love,
Is being in Heaven with you,soaring like two doves.


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Paula Diane S.

© Copyright 1999 Paula D. Stone - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
1 posted 1999-10-08 01:51 PM


oh spirited one

This poem was really neat in the way it guided me through the questions. I enjoyed it very much.

freespiritfem
Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA
2 posted 1999-10-08 02:25 PM


thank you,LngJhnAg,I've been going through a long-distance love affair..writing is the only thing that keeps me sane!!! Also, reading everyones beautiful,funny,sad,deep,light-hearted,and inspirational work..
Thank-You all for making me feel at home!!!! I guess the old saying is true."Home is where the Heart IS",and this seems be my new home!

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Paula Diane S.

Jucco
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3
austin,Texas,Usa
3 posted 1999-10-09 07:18 PM


Freespiritfem, very well done!.I enjoyed it!

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Lee D.

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