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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-07 10:37 PM



I wish I had a flower, for
each time you thought of me.
Would my room be full?
I wonder, how many would there be?

I wish I had an e-mail, for
each time I crossed your mind.
Would my mail box be full?
How many letters would I find?

Does the thought of me make you smile?
Are you glad that I'm around?
Does thinking of me, make you feel better,
when you're feeling lost and down?

All of these thoughts, keeps me going,
carried with me through out the day.
But Lord, when I fell so hard for you,
I never dreamed it would be this way.

...And so I wonder...

Would my mail box be empty?
Would there be no flowers anywhere?
Am I existing in a world,
where you're not really there?

I think this could be true, but I
have to keep my dreams alive.
Without you in my heart and mind,
there's no way I could survive.

I may never get any mail, and I may
never get one flower.
But you still keep my hopes alive,
and the only one with the power.

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-07 11:03 PM


Very very good! I liked this alot!

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Denise

Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-10 12:50 PM


Back up you go!

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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
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3 posted 1999-10-15 08:01 PM


Wonderful poem Kitty. Keep dreaming, they may come true. : ) Back up you go again. : )
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-15 08:04 PM


Wonderful poem Kitty!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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