what is love(challenge from systematic decay)

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what is love(challenge from systematic decay)

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-07 09:43 PM

a false idea
a dream followed
a dream destroyed
a despair filled tradegy
a despair filled emptyness
a desolate man
a desolate life
a dead end to this teen
a dead end to this life

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life is short kill quick

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-07 10:06 PM

Love's loss can hurt, even seem to kill us. Hang in there. Time does heal all things. You have expressed the pain so expertly.

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Denise

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-07 11:45 PM

Good poem, although the ending was so hopeless......As long as you have hope...it will all work out.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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