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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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My Love, I know thy love for me From cistern deep it flows freely Do draw closer to my side And I will have you as my bride How long ago did you and me Share secret words of poetry From shyest quip to longest line I knew not then that you'd be mine How long it seemed for trust to be Established betwixt you and me We came to know our souls' delight Our fears, our loves, our days, our nights Now, at last, we love have found But our voices voice no sound For our heart-beats side by side Thrill that you wouldst be my bride Alicat, the twitterpated satiated kilted kitty |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh this makes me smile...  You dear, will get a more in depth reply in private. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
this is lovely Alicat...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! You two should have this printed for your wedding and given to all the guests! What a lovely gift from one heart to another! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Why, you romantic devil, Alicat. Well done, indeed! (Her love flowed from a cistern?Wow.) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such beautiful poetry must surely come from the heart of a poet in love! Very good!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, you most certainly are bitten, smitten and in love I like!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well done indeed! Condolences on the marraige Ali...LOL! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - This Alicat's got it bad...  |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I have to admit you have a wonderful flow here that matches the words well. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
WOW number 20 ! |
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