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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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I can't move myself I can't reach the door I just sit in the corner attached to the floor The wall just ahead is all I can see little by little it closes in on me I sit and think as my heart slows its pace and more and more tears just roll down my face But why do I care? And why do I cry? I've always known I deserve to die! ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Echo, Good poem bad end. Very few deserve to die. What horrific sin did you commit besides writting a bad end to a good poem. hehehe. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My friend, I understand. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
No one deserves to die,we all as human beings, have crosses to bear, at times in the face of disaster, we must hold our heads up, and say, maybe I got knocked down today, but as long as there is tomorrow, I can try again, and besides how could someone as beautiful as you, one who creates such beauty, deserve to die. Please keep trying to turn the destructive thoughts you have for yourself, and use them as creative tools, as poets it's our fuel, and our passion, you are far too beautiful for this world to lose!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Echo, your talent shows through in your work - as does your pain. But there is a wonderful world out there waiting for someone as young and bright and talented as you. Grab it! Live it! Enjoy it! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Echo, we talked earlier, and I'm so glad...I just want to say that I want to see you take a stand for YOU! You have to choose to be strong, and stand up & take control of what's going on - - We all have to find our own happiness - it doesn't just come to us...we have to go get it !! Don't lay down like a wounded animal and let death steal your future away...The same rules apply to us, as they do in nature. The strong survive, and the weak are eaten...Please stand up out of that corner, dust off all the pain & humiliation, and show yourself that you are a survivor ! I know you struggle to see the value in you - but let me tell you...it is there. Don't let depression steal another day from you !!!! I am here to back you up & you are in my thoughts!! Lots of love to you....Gennifer ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Echo.....I know exactly how you feel....for I've done the same thing so many times....just hang in there, things will get better someday. They have to.....don't they? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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