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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704


0 posted 1999-10-05 11:37 PM


(Chris - bit out dated now
but still the last bit applies!!!)

All I can do is write
into this dreadful silence
where I know not
where I belong
love:
what is ailing you?
this silence speaks
of dreadful things
the truth I do not know
my tears are pleas
speak to me please
for your silence
is a knife so sharp
it cuts into my heart
I'll be your comfort
I'll be your strength
but first I need
to know how and if
my help is needed
Am I an ignorant
cause of blame?
Then let me soothe
and heal your pain
but if one other
has so much as hurt
one precious piece of you
Then, by God
she should watch out...


KM 6.10.99

© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-06 04:30 AM


I claim first dibs on whatever is left when you get done with her!!
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-10-06 08:14 AM


Severn,
Nice one I'll take a little of what's left. *L*

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-06 09:46 AM


Ah, heaven help that girl!!
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-06 12:59 PM


hey Chris....are you listening??.......loved the read Severn

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-10-06 08:51 PM


Thank you love. Though I didn't respond, your words helped me through the night. (And I hadn't seen that side of you yet!!!)
Thank you to Dream.
And sey!

Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-10-06 09:01 PM


Well Done Severn.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

7 posted 1999-10-07 04:08 AM


Nicely done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


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