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toocute4u_27
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since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA
0 posted 1999-10-05 11:21 PM

My life was torn and shattered
I thought being with you was all that mattered
All my dreams where lost
I had to be with you at all cost
Slowly I broke away
Convincing my heart that it was better this way
Some nights the pain in my heart ached
I felt as though it might completely break
But as time went on I realized it was true
That time heals all wounds
And baby I'm over you
© Copyright 1999 Kerrie - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 1999-10-06 12:02 PM

Excellent! Very well done!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-06 09:18 AM

You Go!! A very strong felt one here
toocute4u_27
Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA
3 posted 1999-10-10 04:34 PM

Thank you for your reply.
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