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The Warning -or- My Mood Tonight
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The Warning -or- My Mood Tonight |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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The Warning Withhold now your spite, I can stomach no more. Vile guilt you invite, anger comes to the fore. Always a lover, now you burden with pain. Go for the jugular, ripping my soul again. You mess with my mind, vile mouth playing with words. I do now in kind, for my demons you've lured. So ware now and ward, a bitter heart's been scorned. Come now, step forward, knowing you have been warned. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Very expressive. This is excellently done. ------------------ Denise |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Great poem....had to read over it a couple times, I liked it a lot. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Eeks...(Tip Toing to the back of the room). Think I'll sit silently here for a while. Good poem Chris. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Strongly worded! Glad I didn't make you mad! You can feel the heat on this one! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I know who I would like NOT to be! Well done! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Michael: I'm with you, as I go to hug my pillow and try to think calm, peaceful thoughts and wish the same here..:-) HUSG Chris ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Forewarned she sits silently in the corner fearful of the slaughter. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well, thank God I'm not the target of this!!! Big mental hugs that I long to give in person and a kick in the proverbial for 'her'. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew....very emotional and strong. This is quite well done Chris, I can feel the anger 3000 miles away |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
WOW.....hope you are feeling better today Chris......very well written....and you surely got your emotions across........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yikes! The poem is excellent..should I suck up a little more? Don't want you to be mad at me like this!!!!  |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Mind if I use this one Christopher?? I know a few who would benifit from it! Great poem! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
 Thanks friends. Rough night last night, and needed some "therapy!" |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Isn't it great to be able to write things out like this and feel better afterward? I do some of my best when I'm p'd off ! It's a grand poem, Christopher! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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