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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Passions Herds vs Written Herds Crawling halls bugs infest bowling balls pins detest Windows cracked dampness seeping kindness lacked sanity creeping Hidden closets fears dwelling literary deposits brains swelling Written words meanings expressed passions herds formally impressed --------------------or Written Herds Crawling balls bugs detest bowling halls pins infest Windows lacked dampness creeping kindness cracked sanity seeping Hidden deposits fears swelling literary closets brains dwelling Written herds meanings impressed passions words formally expressed Thought this was kind of interesting. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
You're NUTS just like the rest of us, Ratchet.... better watch out!!!! mwahahahaha Didn't know you could write like this. Been taking lessons from ONE FLEW? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I like this one! This was neat. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Justin Thyme, go back to your rubber room, and give me that darn laptop that unknown poet managed to sneak into you. I'm still hunting him down, this place is just to busy. WhtDove, Thank-you for reading, and responding. After I posted it I started playing with it, and that's how the (or) came to be. Glad you liked it. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Nurse Crachet....you can give me a lobotomy anytime. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Vincent VanGogh New Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 9somewhere in France or Italy (me thinks) |
Well far be it from me to offer my two cents, but someone here REALLY needs a vacation. Hey, Cratchet, Pablo stole all the ping pong balls from the Req Room and we all herds you ain't doing nothin' about it - what's up with that... Written herds, Thoughtless words. Pasion's herds, For the birds. "Tis ashame - Rubber walls, Ain't the same - Without ping pong balls! ------------------ Vinny Only someone I held true and dear, Would I ever lend an ear. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a picture that one paints! |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
Now how did I get involved in this Justin Thyme? What's she trying to write anyway? She sounds further over then me, I need to get my hands on a printer so I can have proof about this, then I'll have my walking papers, no more flying for me! It's a small world after all. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
HEY! Careful with that "bugs infest" jive! Not while I'm on the scene!.....signed..Truly Swollen |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My daughter likes to squash bugs, can she come and play. Just ask Sir Balladeer about all the bugs in OP#1. Interesting stuff her Nurse. |
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